36 "A Special Poem"
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Listen to whispers
Listen To a Whispering Rose
There’s a story about whispering roses.
They don’t have eyes, mouths or noses.
But they know love from the start,
They know true love comes from the heart.
They are given at a special time,
And can make a lady’s heart chime.
If her heart listens really close,
They will say what she already knows.
They whisper, “He will love you forever,
And our love will always endeavor.”
Whispering roses are really smart,
They feel what’s in someone’s heart.
So, if you hear a whispering rose,
Listen real close to its prose.
Greg
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Hi Polly, Thank you. Something hits me every once in a while, and I don't mean my girlfriend. Greg
Hi Greg, this is so beautiful and I can tell it is from your heart. Thank you for bringing softness and kindness into the world with your lovely poetry.
Up/Beautiful
Lela
Hi Lela, Thank you. I have only in the last few years been able to put my feelings into words and even moreso, on "paper", so-to-speak. Greg
A very lovely poem and I enjoyed it. Rated up awesome.
Sweet wishes Rhonda
Hi Rhonda, Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. Greg
very enjoyable to read. vote up
Hi Darknlovely, thank you for the vote up and the comment. Greg
voted up and beautiful! Well written and enticing...
Samson, Thank you for the comment and vote up. Greg
Everyone will listen to the whisper of a rose and its a beautiful thought.
Hey Greg,
Beautiful work! Just so happens that roses are my favorite flowers, you have captured the 'true essence' of this incredibly beautiful flower.
Ciao...Princess Prisca
Great poem Greg, a whispering rose is quite smart, we could all take a lesson from them.
Beautiful..I love Roses!
Sunnie
Hi Slingo, Thank you for the visit and commment. Sometimes the whisper can be heard above all else. Greg
Hi princess, Thank you for the visit and comment. You keep loving those roses. Someday they will love you back. Greg
Hi Dmop, Thank you for the visit and comment. Yes, we could all take a lesson from the tender rose with the protectong thorns. Greg
Hi Sunnie, Thank you for the visit and comment. I love roses too. Greg
Wow, such a beautifully written hub, and by a man. That is rare of us men to have the potential to write a poem with such beauty.
I commend you on a job well done with this hub, and I will be reading more from you for sure, thanks for creating this awesome poem about the love vented from a single whispering rose.
WONDERFUL!!
Thank you!!
Beautiful poem, voted up. Thank you for sharing
Simply beautiful, I just got my friend to read this she, said ah..... And it's by a man. Voting up all the way.
Hi Cloud, Thank you. Hey, some of us men do have a senestive side. My girlfriend is the inspirstion for everything I do. Sometimes a little word from her sets the old wheels to turning. Greg
Hi 34th BG, Thank you so very much. Greg
Hi Forde, Thank you and for the vote. Greg
Hi to B....., Thank you. As I told Cloud, some of us men do have a sensetive side. Thank you for the vote too. Greg
There's got to be a way the two 0f you can be together asap.
God Bless you both ~ how lucky you are!!
Hi 34th BG, Thank you. The one thing that is keeping us apart is her mother's illness. Until that changes we will love each other from afar. We have made it through tougher ordeals than this, we will make it through this too, I know that in my heart. And yes, I do consider myself very lucky to still have her in my life. Thank you for the concern. Greg
Ah - I understand. "Been there, done that" as they say.
She wouldn't be worth your time if she wasn't doing what she's doing.
God bless you ALL... 34th
"Foolish is the child who forgets her parents piteous deaths."
Shakespeare ~ I can't find the play. Heavy & true as all get 0ut.
Hi again 34th BG, thank you. That's one of the many reasons I love her, she has a heart as big as the world and everybody else comes before her. And thank you for the quote. It doesn't matter what play, the thought from you is what counts. Greg
Pollyannalana 14 months ago
A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet. You draw a very lovely picture in the mind.
Polly